Cool! I like the dialogue and theyall seem like very interesting characters and of course, you mentioned catcher in the rye, lol. Maybe add more detail? Anyways I hope you update soon because it has my attention lol.

That was pretty great. Can't wait to see what happens at the party.

It is great so far, I am glad you decided to keep going!

Keep writing btww!:)

my best friend's name is Lailaa!

What karma!

i really like the start of your story! please keep writing :)

and i love the name Laila!

Please carry on. I think that this first chapter is great so far!