Reviews for Rhyme
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Interesting comparisons. I like them. I'm not sure about the title though because it doesn't rhyme.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
"You left my heart like a hole." A very sad final line. This poem was short and sweet.
XxZebbie-CullenxX chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
So short but so powerful. I liked the last line a lot :)
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Short and simple! it was cute and i loved the line 2, it reminded me of those doodles people draw when their bored or tuning someone out, so like ignoring someone...
Black Lotus Flower chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Aw. It was a short but meaningful poem. Even just those few words say so much. Good job!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Sehr schönes Gedicht. Gerade die Kürze ist bemerkenswert