Reviews for Here's Looking at You, Kid
Otakuami chapter 1 . 12/9/2020
omg I absolutely loved the end where they were scared yet hopeful for what their relationship will turn out to be now
06-Alexandria-03 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
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APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Love the story! Great one-shot! :D
heal me forever chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
wow :)
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
gawd I loved it ;)
DofD chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Love it!
XDon't-Panic-SkyX chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
AWWWWW SO CUTE! I loved tht story
nanakathleen chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I commend you. Your ability to write in such a way that completely captures a reader's attention such as mine is impeccable. The characters were realistic, the descriptions vivid. If I were to advise on anything, maybe the ending was a bit abrupt? Nevertheless, I really enjoyed it.
Pione chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Very nice read! :)
ephemeral addictions chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
really good story. i love the surrogate-big-brother/ best-friend turnaround to boyfriend. While it isnt too heavy on the sexual parts i think that it should be rated M just to be safe so that someone doesn't alert the admins and have your story removed. some flamers can be such idiots. Vena cavae- should be Vena Cava. i think that was the only mistake that i found. really like the story uber cute
whisperedcares chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Funny, I should be looking at my AP Bio book for my finals tomorrow instead of being on FP, but look! See, I'm still studying some of what I'm supposed to be studying!

Wondeful one-shot, sweet, attention grabbing...

~Your Newest Fan,

Rio's Desire chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Aw I loved this short, I could feel the tension in the air before their kiss!
Abogerreboo chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
This is so unbelieveably sweet! I really do love this! x
NataliaNicolette chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
well written.

loved it :D
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I like this. It was very interesting. As for the rating, I really think it's up to you. I can understand what you mean by 12- and 13-year-olds reading this and feeling a bit uncomfortable, but I don't think the bumping up is necessary.

I like how you concentrate on their emotions more as opposed to the kissing, etc. (as some oneshots do). Excellent writing, and props to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:
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