|Reviews for Just My Luck!|
| Sheaver chapter 10 . 6/1/2011
Err... _" how should I judge this story? The first parts were good and very carefully plotted but the ending really was abrupt and rushed... Well, you did mention that you rushed the ending but it's still a waste... :3 I love the shoujo-ai theme in the story~~! Especially the way Tomoe gets a kiss to both of the girls every time they meet! CX
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 10 . 1/4/2011
Continue the series! I'm dead serious...
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 9 . 1/4/2011
he, same Ichiko.
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 8 . 1/4/2011
Ooh... smut I see?
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 7 . 1/4/2011
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 6 . 1/4/2011
Exam week? Hell? Aww hell no!
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 5 . 1/4/2011
Jealousy? Once again, my mind wonders... but good story.
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 4 . 1/4/2011
Heeh hee, that was humorous!
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
short, but good. :D
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
Darn.. eh? Jealousy?
| WhAt.is.going.ON chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Don't you dare delete this. This is awesomeness! :D
| 1Nowhat chapter 10 . 5/29/2010
Wow, um, so who does Tomoe love or paired with Update!
| PassionsFlame chapter 2 . 3/6/2009
Really liking the start. Hope to read more.
| the rational hedgehog chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Hehehe, good job on your first story! Speaking of firsts, this is my first time reading shoujo-ai. One mistake;
"Without a second thought Ichiko looked at the clock. which read about twenty-five minutes until seven."
sounds awkward. Either you change the period into a comma or you reformat the sentences. Meh, it's probably a typo!
| Animate84 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
I have not seen many shoujo-ai stories here. So I am intrigued with this.
And I like how this relationship is turning comedic wise.
This has potential if continued and expanded.
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