|Reviews for A Secret Garden|
| Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
WOW, this was pretty intense! I love Lovecraft's work too, and I can definitely see instances where you have achieved his style pretty well. However, some parts of this one-shot seem slightly mechanical, due to the lack of variation of sentence structure ~ most notably at the beginning of this piece. Aside from that, it made me shiver a lot!
Thanks for reviewing me! :)
~ Sakina x