Reviews for 2009 Poetry Collection
sunday night sky chapter 6 . 3/13/2009
As before - wonderful vocabulary, interesting concepts and themes, beautiful way with words and atmosphere, but I just don't like the format, it's too thin! I would like it to be a bit more solid to the eye - but that's personal opinion, obviously! x
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
I love the wording in this poem but the format is too fragmented for me, I like the width to be a bit wider lol! Love this part:

I could love you,

but I won’t.

You’re teaching me,

moulding me

not to.

Really nice!