Reviews for While You Weren't Looking
xxForbiddenxxBloodxx chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
I really like the poem. It shows quite a bit of emotion. I love your style, btw.
Miss Bob chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Hey Euro! Yeah, I lost TBT in the break Writer's Block Forum, and so here's your review!

I really like the way you've played with the words here, or ordered the words (whatever the technical term is), it's simple and it's wonderful. The repetition of those four actions )look, smile, laugh and fall in love) with each repeat given a different angle, is stunningly effective, and that last sentence beautifully ties the entire thing together.

Love it, wonderful poem.
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Love this.

I like how the first and second stanza tie in with each other. I like the ending stanza, it leaves the peice with power. I adore this peice.. with the whole I was laughing at your laugh but then it goes into I wanted you to laugh with me. Nice work. This is amazing. :)

Rolliepollie44
Humming LadyBug chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Oh wow. The last verse was great. Really beautiful.