Reviews for Mannequin
Aylin Halo chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
It took me a while to figure that one out. Nice job!
ilike2eatbabies chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I love this, it was short and sweet. You used the senses in a creative way. You let the reader interpret the meaning, and that is really cool.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I have to say I do not understand this piece at all. The contradictions confused me, honestly. I do like how you used the senses though.
your infection their plague chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I really like it! Itz prdy awesome.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I like your use of the senses, and the fact that you leave it up to the reader to interpret this poem's meaning.
LostInMe chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I'm not sure about the meaning of this poem. Could you possibly explain it to me?
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I loved this! It was cool how it wasnt like a super long poem, cuz if its too long than theres a lot of repeating and stuff...This was perfect, and it was beautiful!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
schön widersprüchlich, einerseits sehe ich sie über allen Dingen schweben und andererseits bekommt sie doch alles mit, gefällt mir!