I can't find words to adequately describe my responce to this, but suffice to say it is one of the best I've ever read.

Oh, so very cute, and short, and good: Thank you for writing this.

Good story. Sad, beautiful, very well written. I loved it.

found this story on skow's award page

short, but i like it

Well it's no wonder this won for Best One-Shot at the Supernatural Awards! It's wonderful! I liked the mystery and allure behind the darkness, along with how you've presented it. It really is fantastic! Congrats and happy writing!

Good stuff. :)

Oh, I loved this so much...This is seriously one of the best things I've read on here.

pretty good story- i liked the characters and the way you phrased certain things. your writing style still seems like it's a work in process- but that's not a bad thing. it just means you need to write more so you can develop a more advanced style of writing.

-wingedauthoress