Reviews for Their Story
mia5081 chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
This was so incredibly sad. I wanted him to take it back or something and apologize to her. /

Good job though, I liked it ]

Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
This was incredibly raw, and by that I mean the emotions, because the writing was beautiful. It's sweet then sad, and the reader feels his and her emotions. It's a wonderful oneshot, and I'm totally adding it to my c2. (:
WalkingUnnoticed chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
that was really sad, but well written and i liked it. good job!
blurrylights chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I'm crying right now...she was about to say she loved him too. Wow..

This was an extremely well written piece. It was short, but beautifully expressed and the style just added more to it. Just... amazing. The ending made me so sad, that she was resigned to the fact that no one loved her. And how she would cherish him, and that ,forever.

"Because she was hiding. She was getting ready to leave. She was making herself inconspicuous, so that no one would remember her after she was gone. She would make a clean break."

Those three sentences impacted me the most, I think. That's where I started crying. I could feel what she was going through.

Like I said, amazing.
GoneWithoutASound chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Aw...tha was really good, I started crying. I loved the emotion.
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