Reviews for Dandelions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good - wonderful detail and what not, but i think that you need to seperate that main paragraph up into smaller paragraph, it's one long paragraph and looking at it makes me die. but it's a very well written short story, and I think that it would be one of my favorite snipets of a moment! anyways, kai |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I might just cry. That is amazing. And I've just gone quiet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. Very well written. though you should put paragrahs in the story so it's easier to read. anywho. happy v-day. peace love happiness |
![]() ![]() ![]() THis is very graphic and moving for everyone who has ever known the magic and sorrow of wishing on dandelions and watching them drift away in the sunshine. |