Reviews for Dandelions
DELPROF chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
This is really good - wonderful detail and what not, but i think that you need to seperate that main paragraph up into smaller paragraph, it's one long paragraph and looking at it makes me die.

but it's a very well written short story, and I think that it would be one of my favorite snipets of a moment!


Danny Rose chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
...I might just cry.

That is amazing. And I've just gone quiet.
Kat The Great chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Loved the story. Very well written. though you should put paragrahs in the story so it's easier to read. anywho. happy v-day.

peace love happiness
Punslinger chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
THis is very graphic and moving for everyone who has ever known the magic and sorrow of wishing on dandelions and watching them drift away in the sunshine.