|Reviews for The Average American College Boy|
| CatProduttore chapter 4 . 3/12/2010
A curling iron? Really? That's creativity!
| CatProduttore chapter 3 . 3/12/2010
Haha! Rose is awesome!
| calmthestorm chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
oh i love your story! cant wait for more!
| The Dreaming Mermaid chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
ohh, cool, two chapters! thanks they're really great! can't wait for another update.
| teacupauthor chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
I like this story and your writing style very much! Please update soon!
| calmthestorm chapter 3 . 2/20/2009
I love your story!
cant wait for more!
| The Dreaming Mermaid chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
Haha, I really love the names you've given the characters, especially Rosaline, Ben, and Derek. Love 'em P.
So anyway, I find it slightly unlikely that a girl, no matter how full everywhere else is, would be made to room with guys. And also the fact that the mother actually gives in-bbut, this is only the second chapter and I don't quite know the characters perfectly so I really can't be judgmental.
Oh but I liked the punch... I cheered her on... and scared everyone else in the room. Haha, but yeah, I find the best kind of punches to be hard but quick and not well thought out beforehand. Oh, dear, now i'm starting to think... she just punched a guy who's like twice her size, right? / eek. You think he's gunna punch her back? No he wouldn't... would he? Ohmygod, updatee.
| The Dreaming Mermaid chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Haha, that was really good. Whats the 'big mistake'? Haha, I have a few guesses but... next chapter? can't waitt.