A curling iron? Really? That's creativity!

Haha! Rose is awesome!

oh i love your story! cant wait for more!

ohh, cool, two chapters! thanks they're really great! can't wait for another update.

I like this story and your writing style very much! Please update soon!

I love your story!

cant wait for more!

Haha, I really love the names you've given the characters, especially Rosaline, Ben, and Derek. Love 'em P.

So anyway, I find it slightly unlikely that a girl, no matter how full everywhere else is, would be made to room with guys. And also the fact that the mother actually gives in-bbut, this is only the second chapter and I don't quite know the characters perfectly so I really can't be judgmental.

Oh but I liked the punch... I cheered her on... and scared everyone else in the room. Haha, but yeah, I find the best kind of punches to be hard but quick and not well thought out beforehand. Oh, dear, now i'm starting to think... she just punched a guy who's like twice her size, right? / eek. You think he's gunna punch her back? No he wouldn't... would he? Ohmygod, updatee.

Haha, that was really good. Whats the 'big mistake'? Haha, I have a few guesses but... next chapter? can't waitt.