Reviews for Don't Text and Drive |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha This was really a one shot . . . .awww too good.. .too good ! |
![]() ![]() OMG I love this story it's so cute I can't even.. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story makes me go: alsdjfhjalkdsfjlkajsdf. No words can express how I feel about it. It's amazing but amazing just doesn't fit it because it's so much more. Cute, well, it's more than just cute. I can't. Ugh. xoxo, JustWish |
![]() ![]() ![]() This proves that short and sweet can really hit the spot. Excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and cute! Love it! Definitely has the NGAAWWWWW factor :) Cheers, TQL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I am here to share some exciting news! This story has been added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo! :) Here's the Review: "Sakurelle shares with us a completely different type of Valentine's Day story with “Don't Text and Drive”. All Melinda wanted was cheese to make a sandwich when she nearly got mowed down by a bright red truck, the driver not even paying attention because he's too busy sending a text! “Don't Text and Drive” is a creative, unique one shot that will have you smiling along with every moment as you read. The catchy dialogue; especially the first part of the interaction where Melinda yells at him; is believable and helps the reader build a rapport with both characters. Even though we all know not to get into a stranger's truck, I think everyone can admit they would have been curious enough to see what happens and the reader lives vicariously through Melinda. This story is a short, sweet and stunning read that will have you returning time and time again." Keep writing, Helen xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. That was just... amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha im pretty sure ive read this before lol. but i re-read it anyway. cos it's cute :) |
![]() ![]() Swwweet! I love this one! It's a perfect Valentine's story for singles who would like to be doubles.. of course, throw in a warning about getting into vehicles with strangers for the younger audience.. :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally loved this! It was so cute! And you actually know what grammar is; praise the Lord! Awesome job! I look forward to reading other stories by you! ] ~Ouaysis. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your story. so cute. i hope i can get a boyfriend too like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. cute! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute, I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Hello, it's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. Your one-shot is simply CUTE, so it has been added to ADoR. Here's your raving review: It's short and sweet with its adorable ending. The Valentine's Day one-shot is creative and the dialogue will put a smile on your face. XOXO, Juliet |