Reviews for Nightsong
TMSantos chapter 32 . 10/2/2015
Looking forward to rereading Nightsong 3
Ren the Wolf chapter 5 . 6/5/2013
Wow, Asya sure is bossy! lol

-L. Mercy
Ren the Wolf chapter 3 . 5/26/2013
My reaction to Prince Charming: AWKWARD. o.O

-L. Mercy
Ren the Wolf chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
Well, this is getting interesting...

-L. Mercy
Ren the Wolf chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Whoa... Wonder what's gonna happen next... Good storyline :)
AriTakahashi chapter 31 . 2/8/2013
Adorable! I loved it!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/25/2013
though I don't know it was because he was unused to anyone telling him to do something or because of the girl, I don't know. I looked at her and then looked at him questioningly. -

Perhaps should read "Although whether it was because he was wasn't used to anyone telling him what to do or so as not to frighten the small child, I do not know..." ? ? ?

I sort of stumbled over the sentence in my mind. That's the only reason I'm bringing it up. :)

The other thing... Perhaps there should be some more communication between the two characters before it jumps into her giving orders?

It works alright as it is... but to be fair Brecken and her haven't said two sentences to one another.

Please don't take this as me not liking it. I'm still enjoying it quite a bit! :)
LKJ Slain chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
This chapter is good, her reactions to the "toilet" room and everything. :)

I DO feel that it moves a little fast though. Again, I think what this section of the book is missing is perhaps her "inner monologue" regarding her situation. Does she think this is a dream? What does she think of these men? What does she think she's here for? Etc...

Again, well done and good! :)
LKJ Slain chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
The only thing that I'll say about this chapter is that it feels as if there needs to be some hesitation for her to follow him. After such an ordeal, it feels a tad off that she'd just follow him right into the castle.

Sort of similar with the moment where he knocked Charming back. She runs to charming (as anyone would do) but then proceeds to shout at this very dark figure.

Perhaps there should be some mention of her believing that this is a "dream" anyways or something? So why not take a stance?

All in all, this is intriguing and I'm going for another chapter now. :)
LKJ Slain chapter 3 . 1/25/2013
I'm smiling a lot. This is fun! :)
LKJ Slain chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
Onward! :)
LKJ Slain chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Makes me want to know what happens next! :)
katmama chapter 31 . 7/26/2011
You know, I always believed that Prince Charming was just too good to be true! Love the story!
Ashley4287 chapter 31 . 4/23/2011
Aw haha one of the best fairy tales ever. :D didn't see anything coming, which is actually new for me, i mean i usually suspect something, but in this story, it was all a surprise.
Fantasy's Only Voice chapter 2 . 3/29/2011
LOVIN this story so far! Keep on writing!
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