|Reviews for What Dreams May Come|
| Ray-Anne chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
*Is uncontrobally excited*
Amazing. So great to read, and was really funny yet caught her tension at the same time. Such a way with everything. Loved it
| UndeadWithoutCoffee chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Summary: I really do like your summary. It grabs my interest even though it seems so normal. Maybe it catches my eye because of the "simple" truth speaking to me. Well done!
Setting/Plot (some mix of it): The beginning paragraph is really awsome it felt like I could see it!
What I found a bit weird are these phrases: "I couldn’t see, but I just knew. I was a stranger to this place, but I just knew."
The appearing of Tri is great. The description of him made me grin, it was so unexpected!
For non-english people: What is a cheese bus?
You really leave me back thinking: Was the part with Tri only a dream? Was this school a dream and she was talking to a character of a dream?
What I liked most about your story were the vivid descriptions, I was able to picture every setting and character you were describing!
I really enjoyed this story and I think you did a great job with it!