Reviews for Untitled 2
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Absolutely beautiful. So beautiful.
MidnightSun95 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
all i can really say is it's beautiful.

my fav line was "the earth drinks of me deep inside its darkness"

i also love the metaphor
ClosetPianist1 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
very good! i love how the whole poem is a metaphor, and a pretty one at that. good work!