Reviews for Never Letting Go
Golmere Verns chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Not bad. Wordings a little choppy, but that's OK. Good emotion and I like the idea.

Good job,

Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Very cute! I like the rhyming. Good job
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I like it, but it doesn't really have a rhythm. Rhyming poems usually need a beat or rhythm to read to or else it doesn't flow well. Other than that, though, it's pretty good:)

Keep it up!