Oh... That was so good. All through the story I was like "No, poor best friend who loves him" and hating on the girlfriend, then my relief was just sooooo great when I found out the twist at the end. Good story- I've commented on three so far. More than I've done for any other author (in seperate stories- there's this one story I love and the author hasn't updated in half a year so I'm re-reading and commenting a lot)

THIS IS SOOOO CUTE! OMG! OMG!

You are too good! :)

I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT.

I was actually slightly pissed at him for hanging up on his best friend so suddenly.

But Omg... so sweet ;)

Hey,

I thought this story was really cute and I like the idea that when he was most upset - he could still turn to his best friend [even though she was his girl friend]. :)

awwwwwwww:) this was brilliant, even though i guessed what would happen about halfway through... i ADORED all the cheesy cliches and stuff! good job!

One of the best! :D I felt sympathy for the best friend because the way the guy described THE girlfriend by enumerating the reasons why he loves her perfectly described THE best friend. It made sense in the end though I've got to admit, I realized it at the last part already. Great work!

i reread this thrice, trying to understand it. i couldnt really understand, and was thinking, "aw can he just hang up on his bff like thatXD" then WOOW turns out they are dating:D perfect:D

awwww how cute :) I certainly didn't guess ;)

Ri

It's cute.

No, I had absolutely no clue that they were together! You did an amazing job concealing it and surprising your readers at the end! I thought this was going to be some depressing, angsty story about unrequited love so imagine my shock at the ending! I lost count of how many times I "Aww!"-ed while reading. XD

-TeddyBearHugs

I will start by saying that I loved it!

This was something new and fresh, the way you wrote it was amazing, letting us belive that she was the tipical girl in love with her best friend. I loved the fact that you didn't reveal anything until the end. I was very surprised in a good way to find out that she was the girl he was talking about...and belive me or not...youre story makes me crave for a relationship like this. Congratulation!

Super cute and adorable! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Love this. Super adorable.

this was amazing. i loved every second of it! :D

this is so sweet...