“Yeah well you got a great best friend,” she said as her hands began to encircle around his neck. “Every time I want to call my best friend to talk about you, he always wants to talk about his problems with his girlfriend instead. I mean, really, how bad of a friend is that?”

i really like that part :D

That was cute! I realized they were a couple when he got to her house. This was well written. I liked it a lot. :)

i get it!

the best friend is the girlfriend right? LOLS i was like what? at the end i had to like reread it like a 100 times lols :D that was super cute

i thought for a moment that his girlfriend wasnt the one on the line but omg that was a suprise :O lols :D

anyways that was great!

GAH! How cute was that? Okay, I totally didn't see that the best friend was the girlfriend until the end. I was like AWW NO DON'T GO BACK TO HER YOU HAVE TO GET WITH THE BESTIE REIWOURYWQO-and then I was like, oh.

Nicely executed twist and super super cute. Keep writing!

;)becky

I really loved this. It really makes you think for a second...i know i did at least. Ugh i hate having a young mind but at first it confused me, then it actually made sense...sort of.