Ah! this is a really really good chapter. I love it... your the best. keep it up, and don't forget to update and thank you for this wonderful chapter.

I love this story is really cool, but if I was her I will also be scare. Keep up the good work and don't forget to update soon please.

this is very interesting and intriguing. i'm looking foward to see more of this story

-grace

Hmm, this is different. Very interesting. It's original, I like it. I can't wait for an update!

PS. It jumped from chapter two to chapter four.

Wow, some of your diction has left me breathless. Your style is so perfectly wistful and fragile that I'm almost afraid to read these pretty lines, in fear of breaking them in their mesmerizing state.

Please, continue.

I'll be watching.

And waiting.

Oh what happens! What happens! I want to know!