Reviews for Clever Comeback |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( Update soon! That's all i can say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was much...sweeter than I had originally suspected. The first meeting. Very heart warming, |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really have a great story going here. Your ideas have me hooked and you put them down really well. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliff hangers. Sigh. This is very interesting, I love the subtle ways the perfume is used in the room. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. What is going on? O_o |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! You're getting better & better with every chapter! So, now you need to go and write some more, because I want to read on! Right now, plz. I see you in the kitchen telling me how bored you are and how itchy your boobs are, but I don't care, because you need to write. (: I love you sister. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, this is so exciting! D Can't wait for more. But if I lost my best friend and I started seeing her in mirrors everywhere, I'd be trying to committ suicide! Haha. But that's just me. Wonderful story you have here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story. reli like it! hope u update soon! ~Good luck writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scary encounter...You write well their (mother and daughter) relationship. Good description as well |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol I love the last phrase. I can't wait for the next chapter! So don't take too long to get it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. intense, imaginative and creepy. I like the sense of foreboding you put in at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bahaha, lovin' it. For real. absofuckinglutely LOVING it. & I will continue to ride your ass about updating the way I have been the past couple days. Because it's apparently working, cause this is one amazing chapter. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I wish you would have told be about this a long time ago... like when you first wrote it? Because, despite what you make think, it is really good so far. I know it's going to be a great read, LOTS of potential. & don't think you freaking suck writing, because you definitely DON'T. So, keep writing, because you're GOOD it, and I want to read more. oh, and I wouldn't lie to you! I love you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, a very sad beginning...curious how it entails to the rest of the story. |