Reviews for Clever Comeback
Charlee Rayne chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
I hope you update soon!
Charlee Rayne chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
:( Update soon! That's all i can say.
Ray-Anne chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
It was much...sweeter than I had originally suspected. The first meeting. Very heart warming,
bleedingxrose chapter 4 . 5/28/2009
You really have a great story going here. Your ideas have me hooked and you put them down really well. Please update soon.
Ray-Anne chapter 3 . 3/28/2009
Cliff hangers. Sigh. This is very interesting, I love the subtle ways the perfume is used in the room.
Maelne chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
Whoa. What is going on? O_o
jordanwrites4 chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
I love it! You're getting better & better with every chapter!

So, now you need to go and write some more, because I want to read on!

Right now, plz. I see you in the kitchen telling me how bored you are and how itchy your boobs are, but I don't care, because you need to write.

(:

I love you sister.
queenhalloween chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
OMG, this is so exciting! D Can't wait for more. But if I lost my best friend and I started seeing her in mirrors everywhere, I'd be trying to committ suicide! Haha. But that's just me. Wonderful story you have here!
ValerieYoung chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
awesome story. reli like it! hope u update soon!

~Good luck writing!
Ray-Anne chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
Scary encounter...You write well their (mother and daughter) relationship. Good description as well
Maelne chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
lol I love the last phrase. I can't wait for the next chapter! So don't take too long to get it up :)
Maelne chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Wow. intense, imaginative and creepy. I like the sense of foreboding you put in at the end.
jordanwrites4 chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
bahaha, lovin' it. For real. absofuckinglutely LOVING it.

& I will continue to ride your ass about updating the way I have been the past couple days. Because it's apparently working, cause this is one amazing chapter.

(:
jordanwrites4 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
You know, I wish you would have told be about this a long time ago... like when you first wrote it?

Because, despite what you make think, it is really good so far. I know it's going to be a great read,

LOTS of potential.

& don't think you freaking suck writing, because you definitely DON'T.

So, keep writing, because you're GOOD it, and I want to read more.

oh, and I wouldn't lie to you!

I love you.
Ray-Anne chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Hm, a very sad beginning...curious how it entails to the rest of the story.
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