Reviews for Torture
Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
(Review Game- Easy Fix)

Okay, before I even start! O.o You had to do APA cites? Oh, the horror; I'm sorry. xD

Ha, I enjoyed the idea of it. Since everyone on FP should like/ be interested in writing, it's something funny to mention. The theme was a little on the sarcastic side, so I thought it was nice to read in a dry humor kind of way.

I didn't like the double-space block stanza, though. It's not a big deal, but I think that form takes away some of the wit? It would be more striking in another form. I'm sorry I can't think of something specific, but it just seemed bland in comparison to the idea.

And I think an a/n would do nicely at the end maybe. A lot of people aren't familiar with the APA and MLA citations (I've only ever used MLA, and I don't see APA very often -in the U.S. at least).

But good job! ;)
Isca chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I agree! I'm much more of an MLA girl, myself.