Reviews for Just Don't Fall In Love
chicagobabe chapter 29 . 5/27/2010
oh me god! loved this chapter. bah i think i say that for every chapter. but its that the story just gets better and more realistic (:
JoeDenim chapter 29 . 5/27/2010
Not only did I enjoy reading from Dan's point of view (pretty realistic), but i really liked how you played out the 'coming out'. This isn't a fantasy world where everyone just accept homosexuals- there is still a lot of prejudice out there. Dan's thoughts on it are even better- he seems to shocked by the information to even really process it, so his mind just skips back to Holly. Good job!
LoVeHoPe09 chapter 29 . 5/27/2010
love it
whildchild chapter 28 . 5/17/2010
Gah! I am in love with this story!

Dan POV please!
hixy chapter 28 . 5/17/2010
oh no no no! dont leave it there! u had me all happy and bouncy and now im all gutted and bouncy. sheesh.

there needs to be an update very very soon!

no excuses!
hixy chapter 21 . 5/17/2010
liking this chappy muy mucho
dontneedyou chapter 28 . 5/13/2010
I like reading Holly's pov, BUT, it would be amazing to have Dan's pov next chapter. :D

Ahahaha, I can't believe Michael did that. Was it only because he was out of it, or was he anyway planning on telling them? Wow, well at least it's all out in the open now. So, I've finally gotten to chapter 28! And I wanted to click to the next chapter, and I realized that there wasn't a next chapter. :( I'm completely addicted, what can I say. I wish Dan and Holly would like...make up. Or at least Dan confess his feelings while Holly still thinks he doesn't really like her or want her all that much. I can't wait till they get to be an actual couple sometime, though. That would be amazing.

About the replies, I love getting my reviews replied to. It shows appreciation, and I honestly can say I detest writers who do not acknowledge their reviewers at all, you know? Even if the review says like one word -which reviewers shouldn't do- it deserves some acknowledgment. :) So, you're amazing for that and everything. ANYWAY, again, this is definitely a great read up until now. I'm anxiously awaiting the rest. Have you ever decided how long - on average - you want the story to be? I'm just wondering. I love all of your characters a lot because they seem realistic with their flaws and all. That's one thing that makes this story amazing, but there's definitely more things that make it amazing, as well. Hope you get the next chapter out soon! :D

dontneedyou chapter 20 . 5/11/2010
Ah! I totally was not expecting that. Wow. Micheal totally surprised me there. And DAN, ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING? I know he doesn't want her to get dragged into his life but he really likes her - and it even may be love. He should make sacrifices, sometimes. She IS a big girl. :D

I'm off to read chapter twenty-one now! I feel like I can't stop reading. I had to go to the dentist and I just got back and started reading again. Damn dentist. I hate the dentist. It hurts. I have so many cavities. :( ANYWAY, lovely few chapters from when I last reviewed, just thought I'd review this chapter out of no where. Mostly because I feel like knocking sense into Dan, even though he's amazing. :)


dontneedyou chapter 12 . 5/10/2010

So, I'd like to say that I think this story here is fucking amazing. I seriously just sat here and read, and I kept reading. I can't really stop, but I guess I have to draw the line somewhere. It's well past 3 AM here, but I couldn't stop. But, since I have to wake up early tomorrow, I'll do the responsible thing and stop right about now. :p

Ah, I don't have much time to leave a long ass review like I should, but I have to say I'm IN LOVE with your characters. Especially Holly. And Dan. And Michael, too. Ah, who am I kidding, I love all the characters. There's so much in here about having fun and all that, and that's what life should be about. Well, mostly. At least sometimes. Ahahaha. I adore your plot line as well, it's very amusing and wonderful. Anyway, just thought I'd drop a little review telling you how much I like the story thus far, and I'll come back to read the rest soon. Keep being awesome!

ConfusedDolly chapter 28 . 5/4/2010
i want dans pov... and seriously? you had to leave it on that cliff hanger? i died! jesus! lol update soon?

libsta12 chapter 28 . 5/1/2010
hey i think half and half. would be great to get in dans head. but i like hollys pov. lol poor mikey. hes gunna regret that!
Roxyyyy chapter 28 . 5/1/2010


Update NOW. :D x
BlueMoonlily chapter 28 . 4/30/2010
lmao a porm magazine? thats hilarious XD

and OMG YOU'RE SO EVIL! lol huge cliff hanger T_T

um idk if in want it in dans POV or hollys POV its its its too hard to choose! T_T i'll be happy with either i think though i DO want to know what dans thinking hm but then i want to know hollys reaction to michael telling dylan he's gay :O:O:O:O it would be kinda kool to ahve it from paul's POV for a know what that converstaion was OR OR michael's that would be kool too lol sorry just thinking out loud...or thinking out typing? idk lol

i hate cliffhangers though i definitely know im gonna read it AS SOON AS ITS OUT! im fucking addicted lol *adds author to favourits* :D
BlueMoonlily chapter 27 . 4/30/2010
aw tina...poor poor tina :(

i wonder if something will happen with holly and dylan maybe she'll get so drunk lol nah i doubt she'd to that even if she was drunk interesting prospect though...

next chapter is the last until another update im dreading having to stop! T_T
BlueMoonlily chapter 26 . 4/30/2010
lmao i want stickers...:p

i actulally really liked this chapter i think it was appropriate..time for a little less drama filled chapter to just relax and i like michael too he's awesome lol

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPPY! *marches onward with a smile* :p
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