|Reviews for Birthright|
| xxxreviewerxxx chapter 15 . 9/7/2011
I know your busy and have writer's block, but I want to know what happens to Rhia and Marcus. I especially would like to know what caused Marcus to think so little of Rhia.
So pretty please with a cherry on top, update.
Thank you :)
| Evenstar1389 chapter 15 . 9/7/2011
omgg this is super duper exciting! I just had to read it after seeing the summary, even though I knew i probably wont be able to read its completion :/
Im glad that it's not the overused werewolves supernatural story, and it looks like there is a huge background there just waiting to be uncovered. But in the beginning of the story when the four siblings were introduced and I read the summary that says that Marcus and Rhia were the protagonists i felt super weirddd... until more of the adopted background was explained of coz. Marcus and Lillian are so mean to her! And after he imprinted on her he starts treating her nicer? way to get into her pants :/
I really hope u'd get back to this story one day. Meanwhile im putting it on storyalert so that i can re-read it if it does continue on )
| Katie chapter 15 . 3/14/2011
Is there ANY chance we'll get to see chapter 16? Ever?
| GOGO chapter 15 . 12/7/2010
So, u planning on ever updating this awesome story?
| I Will Not Die I Will Survive chapter 15 . 1/24/2010
i love this story soo far you have to update soon cause i really really cant wait XD
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 15 . 1/6/2010
Dang Jude's a king!
Wow a huge demon snake...thats awesome.
Sybil must be very important for both of them to protect her and to have this Prince to ask for them to protect her.
Great chap and good fight!
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 14 . 1/6/2010
I don't see why Lillian blamed Rhia...it really wasn't her fault.
Hahaha I love the fact he's human! It's so crazy but awesome.
I can't wait til we get back to why Sybil is so wanted...or hunted after...although I do love Marcus and Rhia D
O more Marcus and Rhia action to come D
| drunkoffwooder chapter 15 . 12/29/2009
hey, i really hope you update soon! i love this story and want to see their feelings develop :)
| HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 15 . 11/18/2009
Great story so far. It's alot like Twilight, but has a bit of a twist. However, at least it's not about vampires as I'm so sick of them. Update soon please.
| kaylabrd chapter 15 . 11/8/2009
Such a great chapter. Update?
| Sure as the Dawn chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Oh don't worry! This chapter was really good. It focused on other characters and had some nice action too it. No fillers or useless stuff. Perfect ;)
| sunshinernnr chapter 15 . 10/13/2009
I never would have guessed that Jude was a good guy in this one (at least that's what I'm assuming now)! Is Jude Prince Raziel?
This chapter really had a lot going on. I couldn't keep it all straight. I'm guessing Lillian's disappearance into an upstairs bedroom with a human will be significant in some way.
| rosieroo chapter 15 . 10/12/2009
wow. this is getting so interesting! as much as i love reading about rhia and marcus, this was still awesome! cant wait for the next chappie!
| Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu chapter 15 . 10/12/2009
I do think that this is one of your best, if not the best chapter you've done here. Quite frankly it's not a good move for the plot focus to be limited to the main characters, so I'm pretty much glad that you actually did a chapter on Jude and Vivi. To be very frank though I think you could have done more on their characters since most of the stuff I've seen here are pretty much action based with not anything much being done on their character explorations. As for Sybil, to be very frank if you want to make her into a vital character, you should try to work more on her character exploration and developments in the future. But this chapter did open up a new possibility in the plotline, so it's a good thing here. :)
P.S: New chapter for The Eternal Grail is already up. Hope to see your review for it soon. :)
| Summer Leah chapter 15 . 10/10/2009
I feel so bad for Rhia! When Marcus was upset that even she could beat him now, I wanted her to say 'now you know what it feels like' or just at some point offer to leave since she's obviously unwanted and the weakest link. except that Cam does want her around. But Lillian is a bitch.
I'd also just LOVE some more smexin'!
Anyhoo, please update soon!