Reviews for Becoming Morgan
Morgan chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I hate the sentence fragments. I couldn't even get past the first few lines yet alone the entire thing. Though, I want to make a valid review, I suffered. You use pronouns way too much, and repeat them too often. I get who "she" is, don't keep repeating it. Also, you give way to many details, I have an imagination and most people do. You have to allow the reader to think on their own and not shove detail in their minds.
morticiansdaughter13 chapter 9 . 7/28/2009
i think u should write more! if its tue end, well it is a CRAPPY one! lol
Nessers chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
I've only read chapter one, and its amazing. Your writing is so intense, and I really want to read more, but I have to get off the computer.
Crystal chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Did she say cute? It's not cute. but it is WONDERFUL. You did such a good job on the last paragraph and although it's really short, I'm sure that you could definitely make a book out of this plot. It's a simple plot. I want to know who that killer is now. E, I love your writing.
Lanie Is chapter 9 . 3/16/2009
:D

This was cute. :D good job.