Oh my goodness! I remember writing one of these... "Theme for English AP," Q called it. Crazy.

Now, I'm not much of a poet, so I won't pretend to actually know what I'm talking about. But as I read this piece, as well as the previous three, I couldn't help but notice that you have a brilliant sense of style. Here, I admire your seamless use of meter and enjambment (very effective; at it seems to be a somewhat advanced concept). Your choice of words in general shows that you have a real ear for the musical quality of language-I noticed it in all four of these pieces. Lyrical, but not heavy handed; a pleasure to read.

Peace,

Cesalie

I love this, Em. It has your true emotions, and I know how you feel, but to a lesser extent. Break away from the pack like you always do! I'll always support you and your writing!