Reviews for The golden pool of dreams
GaIn chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Wow, I really love it. Great descriptions.
Narq chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Oh wow, intruging story... but the lack of double spacing made things hard to read.

Narq.
SpiritedDreaming chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I like it. I likes it a lot.

Nice story. Nice plot. Maybe you could even extend it out to be a full blown story with like multiple chapters?

Lovely descriptions too.

I kind of get the feeling that a few of your sentences and paragraphs are a little too long. Maybe shorten them down slightly and rearrenge words?

But its a good story. Keep up the good writing!