Looks promising. I really like Jacob and Braiden's characters. I'm not sure who I like better, actually.

Hope you update soon. :)

You should update this story, I want to know what happens next and I'd like to know where the story is going.

Nichloe

Awesome chapter! I kinda feel bad for him. Can't wait for you to update!

~Raven

Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update!

~Raven

ah, this is interesting, not much of a plot yet, but good :)

i .. dont really get the summary . care to explain more ? what do you mean ? who is seperated form civilisation ? and then , why can 'you' see ? is the boy to depressed teenage boy ? lools . i think i'm asking too much qn . well , the story is rathe r.. intriguing i must say . keep it up !