|Reviews for Opening Night at the Lancaster|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
well spun and seen
completely makes the scene
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Love this. Especially the ending. I love how you write the descriptions, as though it is following her thought patterns:
"They choke on and spew
outdated ideologies. The egg roll tray must
be refilled. And she hasn't forgotten
where her Marlboro's are this time."
| she smolders chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I like how personal this feels - like the girl could be myself or someone I know.
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
burroughs. ferlinghetti. fake intellectuals, and only the hired help has an intact mind. far out.