Reviews for Something Wrong, Something Right
SpikeyGirl chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Wow, just...Wow

That was a great piece of writing, the tension, the confessions, the in depth descriptions as if you were there in the room with them.

I repeat... Wow
Mistress Milly chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Oh wow, this was powerful. I love your writing style, I really do! This caused a lump in my throat, and I would have cried if I wasn't trying to avoid getting my biology assignment wet with tears...

Anyhoo, keep writing because you're awesome!
m i s t y c a l . m a g i c chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
How...very touching and yet so depressing at the same time. Yay you for double emtion channeling!
Torey Hylton chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
That was an amazing read. It had so much depth and emotion for such a short story. Very tragic, too. You're a talented writer. Good job!
Maplewing chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
That was so sad and yet amazing. It really makes you stop and think for a minute. The kid who says "He won't come into this classroom" is a nice touch of false hope. I love the "I stalk you online" part, and the line about the photo near the bed. Awesomely dark story. I loved it and yet it depressed the hell out of me at the same time. Congrats. ;)