Reviews for Free Association
socks-lost chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
I like how its just one long sentence then it just stops. The capitalizing is kool. Really powerful. Write on!
Isca chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
"I can't get out of this inferno, this hell." This was my favourite line. It's powerful and emotional.
Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I really like how you just end with 'and'. It gives it a very real feel. Like the speaker just stopped and walked away, as if they'd reached a place where he/she/you feel safe and wanted.