Reviews for When At First You Don't Succeed, Try, Try Again |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update update update! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally love that girl! Show him no mercy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! LOVE LOVE IT! AND I MEAN IT! MAN, that guy is such an ASS! WHAT THE FREAKING HELL? YOU DON'T TRY TO HURT YOUR SOON-TO-BE EX BCUZ SHE'S BREAKING UP WITH YOU. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it, great idea... and kinda cliched :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I am THOROUGHLY impressed right now. (And vaguely spooked; I think our muses know each other.) This story is too cute. It's really fun and the characters are interesting-Archer, obviously, has me glued to my screen. The scene in class killed me-I laughed out loud when he pulled her desk over to his. Seriously. I'm totally intrigued about the eyes. As soon as I read, "They say he killed his parents" and his eyes could stop a heart, I sort of mini-gasped because I have an unpublished character named Elijah who fits that description-his eyes are two different colors, one's funky, etc. Anyway, I do love me some recluses. :) I'll be eagerly awaiting an update! :) :) Great job hooking my interest! |
![]() ![]() OMG THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE it so far! Update SOON please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() archer reed is an awesome name. update this soon dude! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this is so good! looking forward to the next update! awesome, awesome plot, I love how she beat the crap out of Christian :) Definately going on my favourites list :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and I can't wait to see what color Archer's eyes are! Update soon please! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg. i really like this story, i hope you update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() WHEN R U GONNA WRITE SOMETHING AGAIN. ITS BEEN FOREVER. HURRY UP. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was sad when I realized it hasn't been updated in a while :( I'm particular curious about Archer's eyes, and am already envisioning the scene where Rylee sees them and they're all close and stuff :P Also anticipating a fight between Christian and Archer for some reason. Nice story so far- please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Review hon,, I miss you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good; i can't wait to see what happens. Also. i have a major GASP to let out. I LOVE HOW YOU PUT JAMES LAFFERTY IN THERE! okay his name is John. BUT STILL! AH! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ONE TREE HILL TO COME BACK ON. I HOPE PEYTON IS FINE AND EVERYTHING~ |