Reviews for When At First You Don't Succeed, Try, Try Again
selucid chapter 4 . 7/10/2009
OH, KAY this is nice your good at these story thing... lol... Yeash welz Hurry up and Update already!
Lethe's Oblivion chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
Hey, I really like it so far, and I can't wait to read more, especially Rylee/Archer interaction. Good job!
stop-drop-and write chapter 4 . 6/24/2009
Romance Nerd chapter 4 . 4/30/2009
archer huh, his eyes must be strikingly beautiful and other people must view them as scary ;_;
spectacularrr chapter 4 . 4/30/2009
“May the force be with you,” I snickered

haha. that made me laugh.

loved the chapter. no names seems awesome.
pinkeclipse chapter 4 . 4/27/2009
archer does not know what he got into...
Moo-moo-cowz chapter 4 . 4/26/2009
YAY! I love new chapters! It's awesome! :D
yunique chapter 4 . 4/25/2009
Very interesting story, I can't wait to see what happens!

Update soon :DD
summers-end chapter 4 . 4/24/2009
I want to know what's happening, aahh! But I thought the irony in what Archer said about Johnny being a gambler was awesome!

Update soon! (Aka when finals are over, I know how crazy they can be)

dabombticktick chapter 4 . 4/24/2009
so the games begin


cant wait till next chappie
cat10985 chapter 4 . 4/24/2009
so this is a really good story! i really like it. i cant wait to find out what happens. at first i liked Ryan, but i am starting to like Archer and i am guessing i am going to like him even more as the story goes on.. well i hope u update soon, but i know u have school so whenever u have a chance!
CleverWriter2416 chapter 4 . 4/24/2009
oh this story is very interesting. i likey D. continue please. D
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 4 . 4/24/2009
love this chapter its amazing
Vaudeville chapter 4 . 4/24/2009
I was super excited when I saw you updated. Love this chapter. And already, I love Archer. Jeez, I just love everything about this. Haha. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
Romance Nerd chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
cristian...(shudder)such a jerk! -_-
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