Reviews for When At First You Don't Succeed, Try, Try Again |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love it keep wrighting :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol...loved her comeback at the end there...can't wait for your next update hope it's soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! I already like this Riley girl :) Update soon! summers-end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! He does deserve what he got...I wonder who he will make a deal with... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. I'm excited for the next chapter. This seems like it's going to turn out to be a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I love every story you write! Wow! Update soon. I know this is gonna be great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this concept, one of the best cliches there is, the sort that are only a cliche /c it's just so brilliant, and you pull it off flawlessly ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. :) I like Rylee, she's got a damn nice personality. I wonder what's going to happen! *curious* |
![]() ![]() ![]() WANT TO READ MORE! please continue writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMIGOD I LOVED THIS! DDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm hooked already. This sounds like an awesome story with great potential. Christian is such a sleazy asshole. Ryan sounds like a great guy, haha. What a sweetheart. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or typos so I'm pretty happy with the story so far :D Hopefully the next update is coming soon! Love, curse the stars. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, looks like you've got another winner here! :D This is really good so far and so intense! I love it. And I absolutely love Rylee's character. Funny, as soon as she caught him cheating on her, I was thinking how I really wanted her to punch him or something, and then it happened and that just made my day :). I'm really looking foward to seeing how this turns out. Update soon! |