Reviews for When At First You Don't Succeed, Try, Try Again
SeaJade Song chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
love it keep wrighting :)
2madaboutbooks chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Lol...loved her comeback at the end there...can't wait for your next update hope it's soon!
BrightFullMoon chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
i love it! update soon!
princessarielle3 chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
I like!
summers-end chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
This is really good! I already like this Riley girl :)

Update soon!

pinkeclipse chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Loved it! He does deserve what he got...I wonder who he will make a deal with...
Vaudeville chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Excellent. I'm excited for the next chapter. This seems like it's going to turn out to be a great story.
Moo-moo-cowz chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I think I love every story you write! Wow! Update soon. I know this is gonna be great!
Regin chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
cosmopolitan chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
love this concept, one of the best cliches there is, the sort that are only a cliche /c it's just so brilliant, and you pull it off flawlessly ;)
Xiaolu chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Interesting. :)

I like Rylee, she's got a damn nice personality.

I wonder what's going to happen! *curious*
pinkeclipse chapter 1 . 2/18/2009

please continue writing!
akinaxxx chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Aurora Corona chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I'm hooked already. This sounds like an awesome story with great potential. Christian is such a sleazy asshole. Ryan sounds like a great guy, haha. What a sweetheart. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or typos so I'm pretty happy with the story so far :D Hopefully the next update is coming soon!


curse the stars.
chel bel chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Ooh, looks like you've got another winner here! :D This is really good so far and so intense! I love it. And I absolutely love Rylee's character. Funny, as soon as she caught him cheating on her, I was thinking how I really wanted her to punch him or something, and then it happened and that just made my day :). I'm really looking foward to seeing how this turns out. Update soon!
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