Great story, great plot line. A bit cheesy, but it's acceptable and also great for when you're in that mood for that kind of story. Could use a beta or two to edit and roll out some of the kinks in the story so it would be smoother. Could also use a grammar check. But great story, with loads of potential. Shame you don't seem to be updating it anymore.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters! ,

1) no offense to twilight fans but personally I think it kinda sucks

2) High 5! Hear You Me was a GREAT story by Mitchie! I'm also a huge fan!

Wait... do you mean Stevie Rae?

Omg, i love Stevie Rae!

Great story, so funny.

I love this! please continue :]

Okkayy this is pretty darn spiffyy(:

But where the hell does Christian come in ? Is he "fox"? Hm btw I thinkk he should be comin son! Andd Sasha is gonna be gettin busy? Maybe? With Fox? Or what ha I think fox(: bawhahaha! Love this

Please pleeaase pleaassee update soon!(: for both my sanity and others(:

Characters are perfect(:! Plus I'm loving Logan :D ha

Love the story so far!

This is going to be a good read(:

Good job, love the characters!

Chapter was slightly confusing. I couldn't remember what had happened... Anyway, update soon!

i think you should really clean up your summary of the story, it is really hard to get. but the story is great so i think you should fix it alittle more, tweak it here and there

hey i love this story :) post more soon :)

I like this story. I'll have to continue later.

But I've got to say...who's the new guy?

Hey sofie! Miss you soo much, starting 8th grade, oh yeah, it daph. GREAT STORY! I finally read ch 7! WOOHOO!

HOLY SHIT WHO IS IT!

yay. keep it up sofia..i will miss u ... maybe we can hang out over the summer (:

yay tomorrow is the last day of school! haha