Reviews for Fluffy
Nightmareality chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I like this poem a lot. I can feel the emotion in it. I think at the end, the "blades of stainless steel glass" doesn't make much sense. I think it should either be stainless steel or glass. I think my favorite line might have to be, "(It didn't matter if we only hurt ourselves in the end.)" It reminds me of a song, when something is sung in the background so you can just barely hear, something that takes a few times hearing the song to catch. I think that fits what you're saying through the whole poem. Good job.