Reviews for Havie Lead Skies
jane and angela chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
This is such an honest look at friendship; it renders my heart, especially the line 'Wondering why I am still here, unable to advance...'. This poem was written so effectively. Great job :)
wordsofjade chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
This is such a true poem. It hits so close to home and is written so powerfully, yet is so simple to those that understand it. Great job :)
OrangeChocolate chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
The frankness of this piece was lovely; however, I feel that in understanding this piece, the words do not convey enough raw emotion to move a reader such as me. Rather, it is drawing upon one's own experiences that brought a swell of feeling. Nonetheless, the last line, "We see different skies now", was very beautiful and tied the entity of the 'story' together.