Please write a sequal

Its a bit like avatar the last airbender and kaze no stigma

Great job! This story is awesome! Totaly one of my favorites.

I really enjoyed this story, and as nice as the ending is, I really feel the need for a sequel. Here's to hoping for one to come!

Great work, and thank you for posting.

You better write a sequel because this sucks i wanna read more i wanna know how it ends... i'm getting irritated but don't mind that XD

haha it better have a sequel!

Heehee love the last line: "Besides, the less people at the table, the more food for me."

i think you're a great writer with many ideas, but you lack the ability to express them all correctly. i have read two of your stories so far and the both end the same, a cliff hanger, with the plot never resolved or clues as to how/why something happens. it seems like you stop far too short, in the middle of the climax. i hope to see a sequel, to expand on elite importance and background.

iloveMarinel! Aerin can be with Elita for all i care! Marinel is mine! :D it's really cool though. you have pretty well rounded characters. and i like Elita too. She's naturally crazy - and i'm drawn to crazy people.

i'll wait for the sequel! More Power. [literally and figuratively - who knows?]

So I was happily reading away, and I come to find that there's NO MORE CHAPTERS! WHAT? I didn't even find out why Eli is so important! And they didn't save the world! And she didn't kiss Aerin on her own yet! WHAT? I desperately want to insult your planning skills, but I know that will not get me a sequel from you. So here's the deal: I freaking LOVE this story, and you are an excellent author, but what you have done is incredibly cruel to me and your other readers. I'm actually quite upset right now... Anyways, please please PLEASE finish this! I REALLY want to know what happens! PLEASE!

Before I forget, I just wanted to tell you how fun this is to read. I find myself laughing a lot, and that's fun for me, especially after all the drama stories I've been reading. Thanks for the fun read!

Yes! This is exactly what I think for the Romance/Fantasy genre! I love this. Well written, funny characters, and few grammatical errors! Interesting plot and ideas. I am glad that Elita didn't (I know it's hinted, but it's not overly obvious or more powerful) have a gift because it made her believable. Thanks!

Well.. you should definitely write a sequel because the story is way too unfinished.. I mean there are still a lot of things left hanging around.. like who is she (Aerin told her she reminded him of somebody and I bet that was supposed to be important), why does the bad guy want her, is it because she is related to the person that the bad guy hates, what's going to happen to the war, not to mention she didn't get a chance to express her feelings to Aerin or kiss him and be engaged.. there are a ton of things left unfinished and I'm sorry to say that the ending didn't measure up to the story. The story is just TOO GOOD to have this ending, it's too rushed! :)

Enough with the critics .. thanks for writing this awesom story anyway..

I think it would be a wonderful idea to make a sequel! I NEED to find out what happens to Eli and Aerin!

Very good story!

I always thought that Eli would gain a power that is beyond the world, maybe the power of ice? Or cure?

but I do like the idea of her having the power to unify, it is... verry unique! :)

ANYWAYS I would :LLOOVE to read the sequel to this one, and I can only hope you do! ;D

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