Reviews for The Elements of Flight
sooner or later its over chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
still good :)
BrightFullMoon chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
i like the new story. it's different and mysterious. update soon. i love it! :)
LorriBetha chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
Oh, I liked that chapter! It was really interesting, and we got to know more about Aerin ... I think he's ALREADY my favourite character, am I aloud to like him, or is he an evil guy in disguise? I really want to know more about Aerin, and why Elita is in trouble, I NEED to know these things, so please please, pretty please UPDATE soon!
sooner or later its over chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
i really liked it :) please post again soon
Perfectly Mythical chapter 1 . 2/19/2009

I love your story, its so...

I just love the way its so perfect and believeable.

I love the story!


You have the heart of a true writer and i will follow your work. Promise

Kayla Brown
LorriBetha chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I love it already, I thought I wouldnt, but it reminds me just of the average day of school life! But I have a tensy problem. It has nothing to do with the chapter, don't worry, its just I'm a little stuck. HOW do you pronounce Elita? and whilst I'm asking, how do you pronounce Aerin either? I have an idea how you say the last one, is it like Air - ren ? And El - ee- ta ? Heh, I love trying to pronounce things, it always looks so funky! Anyways, not a long review, gotta go! UPDATE again soon though, got the potential to be great!
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