Reviews for The Juice List
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15/2016
it's a good story!
Trance19666 chapter 11 . 12/18/2010
Sofie is a tough cookie.

i don't know if i i'm annoyed at her stubbornness

or if i'm proud of her.

she had a headache because he did?

and she is going to get strong like him?

there is no more chapters

so i'm guessing that you stopped this story

or at least put it on pause.

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 10 . 12/18/2010
does Micah have any other Slaves?

can they only drink from their other half?

or can they feed from anyone?

why is the paper with the list so important?

if no one signed it,would they not be bound by anyone?

what happens if the list is destroyed?

i'm wondering when Micah is going to feed from Sofie?

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 9 . 12/18/2010
ok this chapter answered some of my questions

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 8 . 12/18/2010
with the way that she paid attenuation to Rory, it would seem that they might have something going on later?

slave sounds...idk...old

host, blood downer or blood bond sounds better then slave.

though it's your story.

i don't really mind

i just thought i bring it up

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 7 . 12/18/2010
can more than more person sigh the list next to the vampires name?and what happens if there more then one?

does that mean they are more powerful?

i knew Sofie was going to do something like that to save her friends

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 6 . 12/18/2010
so anyone who goes to the party will sigh the list?

i like her brother now

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 5 . 12/18/2010
it seems the new kids have power over normal people.

i sense that Sofie is going to get into trouble trying to save her friend.

at the beginning The Guys Coven only killed one guy, why would they need so many more then one to replace him?

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 4 . 12/18/2010
are the people on the Juice Downers?

how many do each Vampire have?

and do the People on the list get in return.

is it like a mate thing?

where do the people go when they are missing?

and what happens?

do they have to do a spell or something with the Vamps that want them?

the scene with Aaron seem a little random to me.

he left so quickly that it seemed strange.

Janice,the girl that was looking for Billy is on the list?

and Beth and Sofie going to be to?

i really like your characters Micah and Ander.

i can see them in my head when you describe them

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
little slow on the update

so please forgive me.

if they are Vampires then they are like the ones from Vampire Diaries, the T.V show or Twilight. maybe Moonlight? because they didn't burst into flames in the daylight.

the guy that gone missing,he sighed the Juice List?

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
i like you main girl

and her messy room

i'm kinda confused about this chapter

but it's probably because i'm really tired though i took 2 naps today

Jack and his friends are Werewolves?

and the new kids, the ones in the black car are Vampires.

~Trance~
Trance19666 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
this is a good start to the story.

at first i thought the five of them were some kind of were but i was part way through when i realized this story is about Vampires.

i like it so far.

please update soon.

~Trance~
I'm Truly Clueless chapter 11 . 7/9/2010
Wow! I love it! I really like Micah's character, he's really funny :) PLease update soon!
W0lfL0ver chapter 11 . 9/12/2009
... interesting... update soon
scarletfleur chapter 11 . 8/18/2009
lol

this is such a fantastic story! really unique, and original

i can't believe i found it! keep updating - it's really well-written!
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