Reviews for Story Time
Isca chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
"But the bleeding made me feel again." This line is probably relatable to many people. I like how powerful it is.

The imagery of the razor's dragging up-and-down the speaker's back is quite chilling. This part in particular is well-written. :)

"I used to shred myself open." Wow! This line is like a kick to the chest-it's fierce!
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Great job. I really like it.