Reviews for Used
Tear the top rightoffa my head chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
some of these phrases seem like fragments, but it just adds to the feeling of the girl and her broken heart. And I just can't get over

"she used to called him "hero",

he used to save her,

he used to..."

It's very melancholy and lovely.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I really like how you do this piece. In the middle just being like no this isn't reality. It was a great and unexpected change. Also, a really true comment about how people idealize things. nice job.
helloeverybodyhi chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
That was amazing. Especially the part about the sandcastle just being sand. And the line "she used to call him 'hero', he used to save her, he used to...A long, long time ago".
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I like this. I like how the story is portrayed and the repetition of stanzas. Nicely done ]
HeartLikePorcelain chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
i like it :} your good at these poems.
Mom's Mistake chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
I want to stop reading your poems, because the sad ones are making me cry like a sissy, but I can't...

they're so addictive...

3 down...348 to go...
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Sad and beautiful, loved the last line. It had a great powerful meaning!
Isca chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
"She used to call him 'hero.'" I like the angst here.

"Break her again..." I like how this section revealed more of the story.