Reviews for Language Angst
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
I mark myself as a fan of your work just two poems in..

hah.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
"'It' being the hole in my head." The tone here is a perfect blend of comedy and tragedy.

"Star-shaped?" This reminded me of 'the third eye chakra' for some reason. I guess I just envisioned the 'bullet wound' on the speaker's forehead.

"I f**k myself to sleep." This line is realistic, honest, and really shows the inner fragility of the speaker.

"Just a whispered phrase, a malediction...'F**k me.'" A powerful ending!

This piece was very creative and unique! :)

-Isca