|Reviews for Language Angst|
| speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
I mark myself as a fan of your work just two poems in..
| Isca chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
"'It' being the hole in my head." The tone here is a perfect blend of comedy and tragedy.
"Star-shaped?" This reminded me of 'the third eye chakra' for some reason. I guess I just envisioned the 'bullet wound' on the speaker's forehead.
"I f**k myself to sleep." This line is realistic, honest, and really shows the inner fragility of the speaker.
"Just a whispered phrase, a malediction...'F**k me.'" A powerful ending!
This piece was very creative and unique! :)