Reviews for The Watcher
xXx.LetTheWolvesSing.xXx chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
Omg, hopefully there will be more for this soon! I wonder what will happen to Drake? I'm really curious, so it would be totally awesome if you update for it soon! Haha.
xXx.LetTheWolvesSing.xXx chapter 3 . 12/3/2013
Awww, it sucks that he was wrong about her. The ending of this chapter was pretty sad, actually, lol. I love all the detail in this, though. Awesome. :)
xXx.LetTheWolvesSing.xXx chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
Who is the person watching them? I'm really curious, lol. Anyway, loved this chapter, too. This story is really good. ;)
xXx.LetTheWolvesSing.xXx chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Lol, the ending to this chapter made me laugh. That's totally something I would do. xD Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next with this. :)
Cat Parmegiani chapter 4 . 5/15/2012
Really interesting. I like the concept and can't wait to see more!
N-butterfly chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Interesting... I wonder if the person's whose POV we're reading from is a ghost or something...
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Jae.L chapter 4 . 3/12/2010
Oh, this is lovely.

It's been a while since I saw anything of quality here, in these archives.

It's especially intriguing the way you describe two extremely different cases of youth in modern times. Especially in such a mysterious character's narrative.

I do hope you continue.
The Egg chapter 2 . 10/6/2009
"Everything was Self Help.

I picked up one of the mint condtion books, titled How to Grow Your Willpower, and sighed. She hadn't gotten to that one yet, apparently, or the rest. How to live in the NOW! Or The Present’s a Present: Unwrap it were a couple others."

Ha! I know people like this.

Chapters are perfect snippets. I like how you introduce the characters little by little in each. I'd like to see paragraphs, even though that might be a turn-off for any potential readers. I'm curious about the narrator, however. When will that identity be revealed?
The Egg chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
"It was simply a name given to children who desired to leave the ‘child’ category, and be that much closer to adulthood. In other words, a fake category."

Change that "was" to "is" and you have a good quote right there.

"A mans* voice yelled up the stairs."

*man's

I'm glad that you messaged me; I read this story a few months back and didn't review or add it. Your style is simple and enticing. Definitely worth a read.

8/10
Raq chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
I really do enjoy this. Your writing style is great. I hope that you find it in your heart to update soon.

One question though, is she going to stay thirteen?

It just seems odd to have a romance story about a thirteen year old...But, I guess you're the author.

Otherwise, it's splendid.
NationChild chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
I really like how you've written this story from a different perspective; a third person is looking on into another's life. This is very interesting and I am waiting anxiously to hear more!
Goldenstars chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
I like were this is going (though I'm not sure where that is). You drop subtle hints that keep me hooked. Also not knowing much about where to story is going is interesting.

Love to read more!