Reviews for Biting My Tongue
kyox88 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
ouch! it's hurt to read this one!lolz.
Fallen Harmony chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Man I HATE biting my tongue. xD Nice poem!
Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
You some really strong words in this. I don't really know sometimes how to figure out what about the poem or story is good. Metallic taste on my lips is a very strong part of this poem I like this poem a lot. When you review my stuff please tell me what I can fix to make more people want to review it.
Isca chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
"Poisonous bile burning holes in my mouth." Your writing here is particularly good. Nice descriptive wording.

"Words, I'm holding them in for you." Beautiful! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
"Teeth like leeches." This line is very creative and chilling.

"Contorted." Nice diction.

"Can't silence me anymore." Haunting!

:)
Narq chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
oh well, i can only say you find inspiration in everything