|Reviews for I See Freedom|
| ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Its good. I like how you used the first paragraph as the last one, but changed it slightly so that it gave you a sense of closure. Nice work :)
ForeverBehindTheImpression / HighOnBrokenWings
| DraganMir chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
This is a moving piece. Every stanza feels laden in suspense. The imagery is great. Then again, it is always great! I'm not sure if the last stanza shift to the left is intentional, but it gives nice contrast.
Patience, you will find the light soon. ; )
Always happy to review,
| lymli chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
it's hopeless and hopeful at the same time, great piece.