Reviews for Can You
Yo mean fade to chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
grey?
Splash Where Tear Drops chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I thought of this one as a song...I liked it a lot and it digs deep into what a few words can do. Also, how much we can depend on people. Well, what I thought.

Awesome poem, and I hate using "awesome" because it makes me sound like those happy people who are like "Amazin, luv it, update plz!", but it's the only word I can find in my somewhat limited vocabulary to describe this and this review is getting really long so I should stop, but seriously, AWESOME.

Happy writing!

Splash
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Sad but I loved the first two lines the most! D
dark-fire-rebel chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
so true :(

a simple wound will eventually cure, but the pain that you feel within will leave a scar forever :(

still holding back tears :(

love your writing (:

amazing job!
WordSpeak chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Am I just going to have to favorite them all? jk lol this one yet again is great! It's so meaningful. There's an indiscribable beauty in this one. Good job!
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Love this one!
The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
i love the whole poem, usually i just like little parts of a poem,but i liked all of it x)
Thornprick chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
This poem is amazing, i think it's my favorite of yours.

oh gosh, i love it so much! i can't get over it!
lymli chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
the ending is powerful 'cause it's sad but true, and the questions are good.