Reviews for Can You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought of this one as a song...I liked it a lot and it digs deep into what a few words can do. Also, how much we can depend on people. Well, what I thought. Awesome poem, and I hate using "awesome" because it makes me sound like those happy people who are like "Amazin, luv it, update plz!", but it's the only word I can find in my somewhat limited vocabulary to describe this and this review is getting really long so I should stop, but seriously, AWESOME. Happy writing! Splash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad but I loved the first two lines the most! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() so true :( a simple wound will eventually cure, but the pain that you feel within will leave a scar forever :( still holding back tears :( love your writing (: amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am I just going to have to favorite them all? jk lol this one yet again is great! It's so meaningful. There's an indiscribable beauty in this one. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the whole poem, usually i just like little parts of a poem,but i liked all of it x) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poem is amazing, i think it's my favorite of yours. oh gosh, i love it so much! i can't get over it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the ending is powerful 'cause it's sad but true, and the questions are good. |