Reviews for You Who
L.Bronte chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
After having read all of your poems, (and that snippet of a story,) this is the piece that I found the most merit in. Each of the others are indiscernible from one another, but I suppose you did write them all.

This piece slightly details why the writer is in so much pain and anguish. It doesn't exhibit the vacant nebulousness that many pieces of teenage poetry do.

This work would be a great platform to grow from.
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Wow, it's passionate and amazing. I like the new work. (Sorry I didn't reviews sooner, FP wouldn't let me log in) Nice work, beautiful poetry, and a really good story that your poetry portrays.