|Reviews for Top of the Sky|
| lookingwest chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
you really shine with the last two stanzas of this poem, especially the last. I didn't think it would be as strong at first, and then at the end it really left a good impression.
| dchkerwfhkf 3fhkerfhkeghk chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
I have read a handful of your work and i am more of a fan with each word i read. This one is not as strong as you others but the imagry in none the less beautiful. I love the feeling of loneliness and bordom that shines through in this poem. well done
With all respects
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
interesting poem; simple language but kind of cryptic at the same time.
you have really great imagery/descriptions like "and dismally breathing smoke like a/dead candle with a waxy sweat." very nicely written, and love the word choice
the ending was concise and ends the poem perfectly :]