Really like the story and formart.

Clown

Absolutely beautiful! Aaaaaaahhhhhhh...its so sweet how they met and ended up 3, and now the story of Liz and Will :D xx

Yes! I knew they won the cutest couple award! Great story!

Haha! "I doubt anyone has better abs than him in the tri-state area."

So quotable!

So sweet! I always did like Adam's and Marie's romance.

You truly manage to write the sweetest stories Clavie, and trust me, I've read my fair few. I actually first clicked on 'Nuts About You' but then I saw that it was a sort of sequel to 'Sugar Ruch' and decided I'd do things the write way round. Either way I really enjoyed it. Are your stories based off experience? Or do you create such warm, goofy-smile inducing relationships and moments purely from mind? You've definitely made me grin plenty of times :D

I've actually left you reviews before (but I'm usually to lazy to sign in) so they're simply from larafrancesca. I hope you keep on writing (and make that 39 a 40), thank you for sharing!

Lara :)

I definitely enjoyed this story. The pacing was not too slow, which I was thrilled about, though at times I did feel it moved too fast. Though now that I think about it, I am sure the fast pace of the story is what kept me glued to my seat… so forget what I said about it moving too fast. The pacing was perfect!

I loved how you developed Marie, and her slow infatuation with C4U. It was definitely believable because it took place over time and not instantaneously.

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Overall a really cute chapter. First of all there was chocolate cake, and anything with chocolate cake deserves an A.

I was also quite happy when Adam told Lydia off at the end of the chapter. It made me smile. She totally deserved it.

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From this chapter I get the feeling that you are basing these 5 sisters off of the 5 Bennet sisters in Pride and Prejudice. If I am correct, I really like how you did it.

The ending of this chapter was great as well. Adam really caught Marie off guard, and I can actually imagine her shocked expression in my mind.

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I really liked that they took pictures of the group on their way to dinner. I am guessing those pictures will be used later, perhaps hanging in a certain locker?

Marie’s reaction to Judith noticing the cell phones always going off around the same time struck me as odd. She is not a stupid person, I would expect her to think about it a little more and question it, maybe even listen to see if it happens a few more times.

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Trips are always fun to read and write about because so much can happen and I am hoping some interesting stuff is going to happen. No, not dirty stuff, just maybe Adam and Marie getting a little closer.

I was disappointed with how rude Marie was to Adam on the bus. I’m not saying she has to fall all over him, but I do wish she was a little nicer to him. I mean, he likes her because she is supposed to be nice compared to the other girls at school but then she just goes and practically ignores him. Poor Adam.

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It’s about time Adam found out who Marie was. OK, OK, so it only took 5 chapters… but it seemed much longer!

I loved them bumping into each other at the end. Again, another classic/cliché, but written so well I didn’t even care!

The one thing I didn’t like was: "You," the teacher called to Marie, Liz and Charlie, "Start running a few laps to warm up. We are doing gymnastics today." It seems so impersonal and I feel like teachers should call students by their names, especially if it is almost Halloween. The teacher should definitely know their names by then.

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I really like that the father is telling the children the story while they are sitting the airport. I don’t have to worry about whether or not the story will have a happy ending… I already know it does! Which is great, because I am in the mood for a happy ending.

I absolutely loved this part: “Sometimes, not always, she printed the convos or emails from Adam, and the first LOVE YOU she had ever gotten out of a guy deserved to be printed out.” I know so many people who do this… just adding that one little detail helped to make the story more believable.

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Again, I really enjoyed the chapter, in fact I am enjoying the whole story. Marie and Adam are absolutely adorable with their unhealthy obsessions.

The one thing I did not like is that when the characters are conversing on a computer there is just words but no descriptions. I feel like that last section could have had a little description in there between every few IMS. Discuss the quest they take maybe or their reactions to the messages.

Overall though, it is still great!

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I actually smiled while reading this chapter. I find it truly classic that the beeping of the sidekicks is taking place right in front of them and neither realizes they are talking to each other. A classic cliché, but always wonderful if written well, and you are definitely writing it well.

I really like the way you laid the story out, how it bounces back and forth from Marie’s POV to Adam’s POV. I really like being able to both perspectives.

Well done!

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